2016年5月7日托福写作真题及解析

时间:2016-05-17 15:50:04  / 编辑:Archie
   2016年5月7日大陆地区托福写作考题如何解答?小编第一时间为大家带来了2016年5月7日大陆地区托福写作真题解析及答案(托福写作机经),希望能对同学们有所帮助

  综合写作

  关于Ophir这个古老城市是否是位于南亚

Topic 议题whether Ophir was an old kingdom located on South Asia
  Reading Listening
Thesis 总论点 The location was in South Asia Against

Sub-point1

分论点1

The origin of products like rare woods found in Ophir was only in South Asia. Maybe Ophir was a trade center, and products from South Asia were transported to there, waiting to be sold.

Sub-point2

分论点2

It took a year and half to travel from Ophir to the Mediterranean area by ship, which is the same as the time that it took from South Asia to Mediterranean area. The navigation and shipment technologies 3000 years ago were primitive and ships often got lost, which made the voyage at that time much longer than now.

Sub-point 3

分论点3

There were similar words that were both used in Ophir and South Asia. The similarity of some words cannot prove the connection. For example, England and native Australia coincidently use the same word “dog”, but they did not have any connection at that time.

  Sample answer:

  The reading and listeningboth talk about the location of Ophir. However, the professor contradicts theidea raised in the reading that kingdom Ophir was located in the South Asia.

  Firstly, the reading saysthat the origin of products like rare woods found in Ophir was only in SouthAsia. Whereas, the professor argues that there were many trading centers at anancient time. Maybe Ophir was only one of them, and products from South Asiawere transported to there, waiting to be sold. The rare woods may come fromother places, in order to carry conveniences for merchants to bring them tosome other places.

  Moreover, the reading claims thattime spent on shipping from Ophir to the Mediterranean area can prove itslocation on South Asia. On the contrary, the lecture opposes that navigationand shipment technology 3000 years ago were primitive, and ships often gotlost, which made the voyage at that time much longer than now. Therefore, it isnormally for a city nearby to get to the Arabian Peninsula for such a longtime.

  Finally, the reading statesthat there were similar words that were both used in Ophir and South Asia.Contrarily, the listening argues that the similarity of some words cannot provethe connection. For example, England and native Australia coincidently use thesame word “dog”, but they did not have any connection at that time.

  独立写作

作文题目: Which do you prefer with the same rate of pay, an interesting and challenging job with less vacation or a job with more vacation time but less fun?
题型类别: 利弊类
题材类别: 二选一
相关旧题: 类似2009.02.27
写作思路:

有挑战性但假期少的工作,还是无趣但假期多的工作?这个题的难点是假定工资是一样的,所以不能像以前的老题那样,从高薪带来好的生活质量方面讨论。

如果选择有挑战性但假期少的工作的文章就要去论证:a.有挑战性比无的好, b.假期少也是有一定好处的

写作指导:

1、首先人们在完成自己感兴趣而又具挑战性的工作时更有幸福感。一方面,当一个人努力完成了一项挑战性的有趣工作后,会有强烈的成就感,这会让他感到快乐。另一方面,在他迎接挑战的过程中他自己的不懈努力被他人目睹,他人的赞扬和认可会让他充满自豪感和喜悦。再者,能做自己感兴趣的工作无疑比无聊的工作更让人心情畅快。

2、其次,这样的工作让自己的能力得到磨炼和提升。无聊简单的工作无法让人吸收新鲜事务提高技能,而面对棘手但自己又感兴趣的难题时,人会努力尝试去攻克,这可以让人学到新知识并同时收获创造性想法。同时,不断克服困难也是对自己意志的磨炼,更能经受以后的考验。

3、最后,假期过多其实会让人更无聊,甚至丧志。有人认为假期少就等同于生活乐趣少,这是错误的想法。“子非鱼,焉知鱼之乐”。工作着是美丽的,能在自己喜欢的岗位,本身就是一种乐趣享受。很多时候人不是怕忙,而是怕闲下来,工作通过有建设地利用了时间,使人心满意足,再也没有无聊之感。

词汇拓展:

  self-approval n. 自我肯定;自我认可

  undertake v.从事,担任

  go through v. 经历

  unremitting adj.不懈的; 始终不懈

  perseverance n.不懈努力

  self-promotion n.自我提升

  temper one's will v. 磨炼人的意志

  lose determination v.丧志

  muddle along v. 得过且过

  You are not a fish; how do you know what constitutes the enjoyment of fishes? 子非鱼,安知鱼之乐

  以上是一诺小编为同学们带来的2016年5月7日托福写作真题及答案解析,希望能对同学们的托福写作有所帮助,如需了解更多出国留学的相关信息,欢迎拨打一诺留学的免费热线400-003-6508或者010-62680991进行咨询,或者点击一诺留学官方网站http://www.yinuoedu.net/页面的“在线咨询”与一诺留学专家直接对话。微信订阅号:留学圈 (微信帐号:yinuoliuxue )

免费发送到我的邮箱:
推荐专家
  • 姓名:周小芳

专业资历
加入一诺前任职于大型咨询公司,一直致力于美国,加拿大,香港等国家的留学申请,多年的留学申请与规划的经验帮助了大量的学子找到了自己的方向,真诚以及专业的服务态度得到了学生和家长的一致认可。
成功案例
从业多年来帮助多名学生申请到世界名校,其中包括:哥伦比亚大学,宾夕法尼亚大学,卡内基梅陇大学,伦敦政治经济学院。帝国理工学院,华威大学,里海大学,康奈尔大学,伊利诺伊厄本那香槟分校,香港大学,香港中文大学,多伦多大学,麦吉尔大学,阿尔伯塔大学等著名学府。
向他提问

  •  
  •  
  •  
  •  
  •  
  •  
               

关注一诺留学微信

关注一诺留学微博

版权所有@2012-2016    一诺留学网    京ICP备12034294号-1

联系电话:400-003-6508  010-62680991     传真:010-82483329     邮箱:service.bj@yinuoedu.net