出国留学首选一诺留学

　　要想学好一门外语不仅需要足够的耐心和毅力，更需要养成一个良好的学习习惯。托福写作也是这样，把一个Chinglish的句子改为地道英语表达，就能为托福写作加分不少。下面一诺留学小编为大家准备了一些范例可供参考：

　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　通过以上对考生们在托福写作中经常出现的Chinglish修改后的对比，我们可以发现地道英语表达的语法和词汇的使用习惯，同学们要在平时多加练习，掌握这个方法后就可以运用到你的托福写作中了。