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　　作文题目：附近有工厂的利弊

　　A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community.　discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. do you support or oppose the factory? explain your position.

　　作文范文 a factory near the neighborhood

　　Having a factory nearswheresone lives brings with it both advantages and disadvantages. an　obvious advantage is an increase in the number of available jobs, and many people in the community　might find employment in the new factory. the factory would bring money into the community　in other ways as well. it would have to pay some taxes to the local government, and workers　might go shopping or eat at a restaurant in the area before or after their shifts.

　　However, the factory would bring some disadvantages, too. depending on what kind of　factory it is, it might pollute the environment and bring down property values. it would be sure to　increase traffic in the area, causing congestion and making it unsafe for children to play outside.　finally, the neighborhood would become a noisy, busy place. for all of these reasons, i would be　opposed to the construction of a new factory near my community. while the employment　opportunities would help the community, i believe it would be better for residents to commute to　work and preserve the peace of our neighborhood.

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